Thursday, 5 March 2015

A difficult post.

I've just read this article on the BBC website about the rape and murder of a young woman in Dehli three years ago. I heard about the rape at the time, but this article focuses on interviews with the men that did it and their lawyers.

The most shocking parts of the piece are the reactions of the culprits and the implication that this mindset is commonplace in that part of Indian society.

I have no insights into Indian society (I touristed around on the train system back in the late 80s with my girlfriend (now wife) but only gained a wholly surface impression). The huge backlash against this event in India clearly indicates a great many people there were also horrified and outraged by the crime. So all I'm offering are the impressions of the journalist (Leslee Udwin). (Go read the article). I've included some extracts below - after which I consider the implications.

From the article

The horrifying details of the rape had led me to expect deranged monsters. Psychopaths. The truth was far more chilling. These were ordinary, apparently normal and certainly unremarkable men.

...

Mukesh Singh, the driver of the bus, described to me every detail of what happened during and after the incident. While prosecutors say the men took turns to drive the bus, and all took part in the rape, Singh says he stayed at the wheel throughout.

Along with three of the other attackers, Singh is now appealing against his death sentence. In 16 hours of interviews, Singh showed no remorse and kept expressing bewilderment that such a fuss was being made about this rape, when everyone was at it.

"A decent girl won't roam around at nine o'clock at night. A girl is far more responsible for rape than a boy," he said.

"Housework and housekeeping is for girls, not roaming in discos and bars at night doing wrong things, wearing wrong clothes. About 20% of girls are good."

People "had a right to teach them a lesson" he suggested - and he said the woman should have put up with it.

"When being raped, she shouldn't fight back. She should just be silent and allow the rape. Then they'd have dropped her off after 'doing her', and only hit the boy," he said.

Chillingly, he went on: "The death penalty will make things even more dangerous for girls. Now when they rape, they won't leave the girl like we did. They will kill her. Before, they would rape and say, 'Leave her, she won't tell anyone.' Now when they rape, especially the criminal types, they will just kill the girl. Death."

I had the long and shocking list of injuries the young woman had sustained, read out to him. I tried, really hard, to search for a glimmer of regret. There was none.

....

One of the men I interviewed, Gaurav, had raped a five-year-old girl. I spent three hours filming his interview as he recounted in explicit detail how he had muffled her screams with his big hand.

He was sitting throughout the interview and had a half-smile playing on his lips throughout - his nervousness in the presence of a camera, perhaps. At one point I asked him to tell me how tall she was. He stood up, and with his eerie half-smile indicated a height around his knees.

When I asked him how he could cross the line from imagining what he wanted to do, to actually doing it - given her height, her eyes, her screams - he looked at me as though I was crazy for even asking the question and said: "She was beggar girl. Her life was of no value."


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(Still more astonishing and worrying are the comments of the lawyers for these men.)


So, if you read that without your jaw dropping or a tear in your eye you're more widely experienced and made of sterner stuff than I am.

Anyway.

I didn't write Prince of Thorns for publication. I wrote it because I enjoy writing. When, years after finishing it, I gave in and let myself be 'bullied' into sending it to a handful of agents nobody was more surprised than me to find it getting swiftly snapped up by publishers.

The inspiration for the main character, Jorg, came directly from Alex in Anthony Burgess' novel of 1962, A Clockwork Orange.

Like Alex, Jorg is young (13 when we meet him), charismatic, violent and amoral, running with a lawless crew. Like Alex, Jorg takes part in a rape (with the implication that this isn't the first). It's alluded to in a brief paragraph, shown below and whited out for those who don't want to see (though the article above makes it mild in comparison). Just highlight it to read.

The fat girl had a lot to say, just like her father. Screeched like a barn owl: hurt my ears with it. I liked the older one better. She was quiet enough. So quiet you'd give a twist here or there just to check she hadn't died of fright.

The story is told from the first person point of view and the act is not excused or forgiven but neither is it condemned - it's not unusual for the war-torn and primitive society described. Jorg is shown as a violent person who does many unforgivable things. He is the main character but he is also, by many definitions, 'evil'. The trilogy is in large part an exploration of such a person - what kind of man he grows into, how the years change him, how his past shapes him. The aim is a mature character study, showing a person who has many aspects the reader might like, a person who is interesting and involved in interesting things (or I would have few readers). 

Jorg's actions are never explicitly condemned because I assume(d) that the hypothetical reader is someone like me living in an environment where everybody knows that rape and murder are horrific crimes. When writing fiction in such a setting I'm not writing a guide to life - my default is the fantasy readership found in the UK and the US, intelligent, educated, raised in a society where the ideas 'murder is terrible', 'rape is terrible', 'torture is terrible' are on a par with '1+1=2', basic unassailable facts.

As I've said - I didn't write for publication, and when I was published it was initially into English, Dutch, German, and French. I had no problem with presenting Jorg to such an audience.

I'm now published in over 20 languages and many countries. I'm not published in India or in any Indian languages but my books are sold in India in English and I've had contact with a number of Indian readers - all of whom seemed to be much like a western audience in their reaction to the work.


My work on sale in a Starmark store in Chennai (Madras)

I do acknowledge though that if Prince of Thorns were read by people who share the cultural mindset of the men described in the article - it would at best be a book that did nothing to help and at worst be a book that might even reinforce such attitudes by being misinterpreted as a work that offered tacit approval of their view of these things as everyday, trivial, and unremarkable.

Typing away at a fantasy tale ten years ago for the entertainment of a handful of fellow unpublished writers on a critique forum, I never imagined my story would be read more widely. If I had nursed an ambition to be published then I would have thought in terms of making the shelves of my local bookshop. Even if I had dreamed big and imagined being sold in Paris, London, New York, Munich... I would not have had a problem with my content.

In the past two weeks though I've been sent photographs of my work on the shelves of a bookstore in New Dehli (the city where the rape happened) and at an airport in central Vietnam (just an example of a place that is very far, in various ways, from where I live). 

Having read this article - I can say that if I had had an inkling of quite how far afield this work would reach and of how vastly different the mindsets of some parts of some of those societies where it sells are ... I would have changed elements of the story.


[edit: it should be noted that I arrived at this point in-spite of attacks over the years by the highly tribal polarised and politicised elements on the internet, not because of them. Absolutely not because of them. If anything the ranting accusations, being told I'm mansplaining, or a neck-beard or a woman-hater or whatever, have been a significant obstacle to reaching this conclusion.]





Tuesday, 3 March 2015

The Liar's Key - the rough for the UK cover.

Remember when I said this was the rough for the UK/US cover of The Liar's Key?

Yeah, that wasn't right. Minds have been changed. Jason Chan has been pointed at the canvas a second time and now there's a rough for a different UK cover.

And here it is!



"Why?" you ask.

Well remember when I said about uniting the two styles? I guess that wasn't possible. So here we have Jalan facing away for the UK audience.

It looks good to me and what's better than one Jason Chan cover? Two Jason Chan covers!


Sunday, 1 March 2015

A call to self-published fantasy authors

Now Closed

Keep up with blogs/reviews/progress HERE

As a result of the enthusiastic response from the fantasy book blogging community I now have a team of 10 highly respected and well-established bloggers who are prepared to:

a) Put on a pseudo-literary agent hat and accept a randomly allocated slush pile of up to 25 electronic fantasy book manuscripts (new texts or existing published books) and work through them to find their favourite single submission which they will then "publish" into the final round of the competition.

b) review at least the book they put through into the final

c) Read through the final list (9 books plus the one they put through) and score those books out of 10 to generate a cumulative score for each of them which will be used to determine the over all winner.

d) review the over all winner

There's no other prize. The winner will get the publicity of being the winner, plus the bonus of being reviewed on the blogs of 10 highly respected fantasy bloggers.

Frankly you can't buy better publicity than that.

The winning book will have been selected as the best from a field of up to 250 self-published works.

Initially I'm saying self-pub only (no small/medium pub) and we'll see how it goes.


The first stage will take not more than 6 months - but if everyone makes their selection earlier we can move on.

The second stage will take not more than 6 months.


Note - these bloggers are mostly (but not exclusively) focused on the epic fantasy / swords and sorcery end of the genre. As such if your book is a paranormal fantasy, romance fantasy, children's fantasy or even some flavour of science fiction etc it will have to work harder to win.

All you have to do email me the electronic manuscript ready for kindle/PC reading or (if one exists) the link to the FREE version on Amazon. You're welcome to include a cover letter, blurb. synopsis etc as you would for an agent - but it's not compulsory. These guys are bloggers, they're used to making up their mind by starting to read and seeing if they feel any compulsion to continue.

Email me at empire_of_thorns@yahoo.co.uk with the SUBJECT: Book Contest

We're on 275 of a maximum 250 entries.

If (as seems likely) we exceed 250 entries I will select 250 at random  and randomly assign them into 10 groups of 25. I will also assign the excess stories as an optional extra to the batches of 25 sent on to the 10 bloggers. If they choose to consider those too I'll add those names to the list of books in the contest. There will be no pressure for them to do so though as 25 books is a lot to handle.


The blogger team are:

1./ Sarah Chorn of Bookworm Blues
2./ Steve Diamond &co at the Hugo winning Elitist Book Reviews
3./ Mark Aplin &co of the award winning Fantasy-Faction
4./ Mihir Wanchoo of Fantasy Book Critic
5./ Lynn Williams of Lynn's Books
6./ Milo of The Fictional Hangout
7./ Bob Milne of Beauty in Ruins
8./ Ria of Bibliotropic
9./ Tyson Mauermann of The Speculative Book Review
10./ The guys at Fantasy Book Review

reserve
Kat &co at Fantasy Literature
Leona Henry at the Blog of Shadows



Saturday, 28 February 2015

The self-published blogger-challenge

Edit: to take part as an author go HERE


A week ago I blogged about the business of self-promotion.

I realise that this is a lot easier once you're 'off the ground' and that as a new author, particularly a self-published one, it is desperately hard to be heard. It's a signal-to-noise problem. Who knows how many Name of the Winds or [fill in your favourite] are lost to us because they just couldn't be seen? None? A hundred?

So here's my idea. It relies on the labour of others and so it could fizzle and die right now. But let's see.

(I'm thinking here of fantasy books / authors / bloggers, though it could easily be SFF in general.)

I know that many bloggers are very fast readers. Some read over 200 books in a year.

My proposal is to get X of these bloggers to volunteer to become 'agents'. (X will be 10 or fewer).

Each blogger is assigned 25 self-published books, randomly selected from a list of volunteer authors.

These bloggers are NOT expected to read all of these books. Their task as 'literary agents' is to select the single book they want to put their reputation behind and "publish" into the next round of the exercise.



As agents the bloggers will look at the submissions before them. Many they may abandon on the first page as rubbish. Many others may be set aside after a chapter or two. A small subset, perhaps 1 or 3 or 5 will be read all the way through.

After 6 months the bloggers (who are free to review any of the books they were assigned) deliver their verdict. A single book which they review and put forward into round 2. It would also be nice to see a blog from them at some point about their experience as agents and what led them to abandon some books early and pursue others.

This will give us a list of X finalists, one from each blogger.

Over the next 6 months each blogger becomes a blogger again and will read the X books (actually X-1 since they selected one of them). They don't have to read all of each book but should try to give each a fair shake. They assign a score out of 10 to each book and review the one they liked best (not the one they "published"), By totalling the scores we get a single winner from the many entries. Each blogger reviews that winner, thereby giving it the reward of publicity.

I'm looking for blogs with a good history of regular reviews (to indicate reliability) and since I already have too many volunteers I will try to select those bloggers with high traffic/popularity.


Any blogger interested in taking part can comment below &/or mail me at empire_of_thorns@yahoo.co.uk

[edit - we now have 19 highly suitable volunteers for 10 places and more considering, so I'll definitely go ahead. You're welcome to add your name into the hat. I'll select the 10 using a combination of judgement and black magic, with the goal of getting the team most able to offer publicity (through the process) to the winning entries.] 


My first volunteer blogger is Sarah Chorn of Bookworm Blues - so if this goes ahead you'll be in great company!

(these next are provisional as the success depends in part on the bloggers chosen being reliable (and an established regular blog is the best indicator or that) and popular)

Other volunteers that I hope I can be on the final 10 include:
(note - I already have 10 so selection will have to take place but please put your name into the hat)

Richard Auffrey of The Passionate Foodie with 240 books read last year!

Tyson Mauermann of The Speculative Book Review.

The eponymous Sean Smith of Sean Smith

Charlie Hopkins of A Reading Machine.

Katherine of Ventureadlaxre

Mihir Wanchoo of The Fantasy Book Critic

Milo of The Fictional Hangout

Lynn Williams of Lynn's Books

Matt Gillard of 52 Book Reviews

Johann Pollard of Fantasy Opinion

Tim Ward of Adventures in SciFi Publishing

Leona Henry of Blog of Shadows

Bob Milne of Beauty in Ruins

J.R Karlsson of Fiction Garden

Marc Aplin of Fantasy-Faction

Ria of Bibliotropic

Fantasy Book Review are in.

Steve &co at the Elitist Book Review

Kat &co at Fantasy Literature

Friday, 20 February 2015

How many fucks were given?

[this leads into opining about bad language in books in general]

I recently had a question asked on Goodreads about whether the use of 'feck' instead of 'fuck' in Prince of Thorns was a kind of accent or a kind of censorship.

I answered:

Accent. There are 15 fecks in the book and 8 fucks. In a book where a bishop gets nails hammered into his head there's no need to censor swearing.

And having counted(*) the number of fucks in Prince of Thorns I went on to repeat the process with all the books in Broken Empire and Red Queen's War trilogies.

(*) i.e gone Cntrl-F "fuck" in the Word document and looked at the number.

So here for your viewing pleasure are the fucks (and fecks) given in my books to date. Note this includes 'fucked', 'fucking' too.

A quick perusal indicates that we have yet to reach peak fuck.

(EDIT: with Red Sister added it seems that The Wheel of Osheim may well have been peak fuck!)

As a footnote: my most recently completed book (The Wheel of Osheim) contains as many fucks in one paragraph of the prologue as are contained within the whole of Prince of Thorns.

(click for detail)





But wait - there's more!

The discrepancy between the tolerance for sex and for violence in books has often been remarked upon. Even by me. But when you think about it the intolerance of 'bad' language is perhaps even more strange.

I saw one review of Prince of Thorns where the reader loved the book but lamented the bad language. There was, he said, a 'fuck' every other paragraph.

Actually, if you run the numbers there's a 'fuck' every 47 pages - which, if nothing else, shows how strongly the issue distorts perception.

However, more surprising to me is the fact the person could read about murder after murder, read allusions to burnings alive, rape, and torture, and yet be unphased until someone opens their mouth and says 'fuck'.

...really?

That's a problem but the rest is fine? Everything is good so long as we're polite about it?

I find it wholly bizarre when we enter a fantasy world where ever single word is spoken in English with the same meaning ... until someone hits their thumb with a hammer, and it's "Storms!" or "By the Pit!" or some such... It seems the only difference between the folk of many fantasy worlds and regular humans is that they utter different profanities. Also the whole, no needing to go to the toilet thing.

I've met people in real life who are literally unable to get through a single sentence without using the word 'fuck'. There's a guy like that on the show 'Gold Rush' - a miner up in Alaska, an older guy with a beard you could lose a baby in ...  there are people like him all over - they use 'fuck' as punctuation, as filler, and as verbal garnish. If one of them were a major character in a book I wrote then the fuck-count would zip past 37 and probably top 370.

I think the ability to read about terrible people doing terrible things, but to freak out if one of them says a rude word, is related to the sex-violence dichotomy but an even more exacerbated example of it.

Anyway, what's up with that? Comments welcome if you have an explanation!


[this article has a fuck-count of 15 ... well ... 16 now.]

Thursday, 19 February 2015

BUY MY BOOK! An Author's Simple Relationship With Self-Promotion

These days I quite often find myself being asked questions by other authors about self-promotion. On several occasions they've told me "my agent said: go look at what Mark Lawrence does". I see myself cited on blogs and forums as someone who is 'getting it right'.

... which is all very nice, but I've never really felt as if I were doing anything other than having fun online.


I was prompted to this blog by Brian McClellan's excellent blog post An Author's Complicated Relationship With Self-Promotion.

I think it comes down to doing whatever is the best fit for you. I've read Brian's blogs on driving to various far-flung conventions, signings at bookshops and the like. He seems to enjoy getting out there to book fairs and hand-selling his own work.

Which is great if:

i) You have the 'spare' time and can travel.
ii) You're a chatty, people-person who has that magic talent for drawing folks in and sending them away with a book.

On the other hand Brian seems ill at ease with things such tweeting a link to his book, he agonises about spamming his followers etc.

Now for me:

i) I can't travel - I'm always needed to help care for my very disabled youngest daughter.
ii) I'd rather eat a bug than cold sell anything to anyone.

On the other hand I'm perfectly happy to tweet BUY MY FRIKKING BOOK along with a link to the Amazon listing - I don't even bat an eye about it.

(Self-promotion ... I'm not even sorry.)

The reason I'm active online is that it's the only way I ever get to interact with readers - that's my readers and that's readers of fantasy, period. As the parent of a very disabled child (age 10) the last decade has been a very isolating one - when I'm on a forum chatting about fantasy, yes that's me self-promoting, but it's also me socialising. Same with Facebook - yes, I'm posting pictures of my latest book or silly competitions for signed copies or whatever ... but it's also the only chance I get to see into other people's lives - I do it for fun, for entertainment, for company, selling books is quite far down that list. If it happens to look like great marketing to agents etc ... that's really just a happy side-effect.

The other thing I've noticed - and this may just be a personality thing, but I think there's more to it - is that many authors on forums, reddit etc are incredibly guarded, very measured, very careful never to give an ounce of offence. They're there with their marketing hat firmly in place and on best behaviour. They sure as hell don't want to risk pissing someone off. One nutter carrying a grudge could put quite a dent in their efforts and that would be hours of contributions down the drain.

I'm not like that. I just say what I think and damn the consequences. It helps that what I think is (I think) pretty reasonable most of the time - but even when it's not ... I've come to the conclusion that people appreciate the honesty. They might not agree with me all the time but at least they feel they're having a real conversation / interaction with a real person, not some façade constructed to minimise offence and maximise sales.


(look! I did it again! This one even links to pre-order on Amazon!)

My experience has been that fantasy fans respond well to honest expressions of excitement/enthusiasm over the projects authors are involved with, and appreciate honest opinions - even if stated robustly - and openness. Readers don't want to be promoted to - but they know we have to do it. Readers would rather have open/honest interaction with the real people behind the author names than cautious guarded interactions with someone trying to sell themselves. And if you give them that honest and open interaction, your sharp corners too, then when on occasion you do scream BUY MY BOOK, DAMN YOU! at worst they'll laugh it off, and at best they'll laugh and then buy your book.







Saturday, 14 February 2015

The Liar's Key - a contest.

(Contest closed - check for winners below)

I have so much stuff to give away that I just have to have another contest.

To enter send me a photo.

It must contain:

i) a lie
ii) a key (of any kind/size)

The more interesting the key, lie, and photo the more points out of 10 I'll give it and each point is a chance to win. Any photo with a key and a lie has some chance to win.

Example


I will give out one prize per ten entries, up to a maximum of 5.

Winners can choose from (subject to availability):

i) An early signed hardcover copy of The Liar's Key (when I get them).
ii) A signed, stamped, trade paperback of Prince of Fools
iii) A Prince of Fools mug
iv) A Prince of Fools T-shirt
v) A signed proof copy of Prince of Thorns
vi) A signed trade paperback of Emperor of Thorns




Closes Wednesday 25th February. Mail entries to me at empire_of_thorns@yahoo.co.uk

Winners indicated in RED selected randomly by Daniel Polansky whose book comes out today (I review it here).



#57 Brandon (2 points) 1,2



#56 Mia (3 points, deductions for cruelty!) 3,4,5



#55 Nele (2 points) 6,7



#54 Obaid (2 points) 8,9



#53 Ryan (4 points) 10,11,12,13



#52 Tracey (4 points) 14,15,16,17



#51 Michael (5 points - the little arm is good and we have the added bonus of theft!) 18,19,20,21,22




#50 Edher (2 points) 23,24




#49 Alice (an underpass in Wolverhampton - 5 points, has the on-location bonus) 25,26,27,28,29


#48 Krista (own work - 5 points) 30,31,32,33,34



#47 Kayla (3 points) 35,36,37



#46 Paul (3 points)  38,39,40



#45 Malin (5 points) 41,42,43,44,45



#44 Gabe (4 points) 46,47,48,49



#43 James (5 points) 50,51,52,53,54



#42 Paul (6 points) 55,56,57,58,59,60



#41 Alex (3 points) 61,62,63



#40 M. (2 points) 64,65



#39 Megathura (5 points) 66,67,68,69,70



#38 Nicholas (so many keys!) 4 points 71,72,73,74



#37 Dusty (4 points, the exploitation worked) 75,76,77,78




#36 Kurt (going out on location to capture Francis Scott Key (top of plinth) and his daughter holding what purports to be an original Monet.) (6 points - for going out in the wild & the most unexpected key so far) 79,80,81,82,83,84



#35 Robert (3 points) 85,86,87



#34 Rob (4 points - for the best key so far!) 88,89,90,91




# 33 Mike (3 points) 92,93,94




#32 Robert (1 point) 95



#31 Angela (3 points) 96,97,98




#30 Colin (3 points) 99,100,101



#29 Hakken (5 points) 102,103,104,105,106



 #28 Andrew (3 points) 107,108,109



#27 Daniel (3 points) 110,111,112



#26 Pen (6 points, for initiative and sacrifice) 113,114,115,116,117,118



#25 Fiona (2 points) 119,120



#24 Jason (3 points) 121,122,123



#22 Alicia (3 points) 124,125,126




#21 Shaun (lies in code with a key key!) (5 points) 127,128,129,130,131




#20 Ralph (4 points) 132,133,134,135



#19 Robin (5 points) 136,137,138,139,140




#18 Barry (4 points)  141,142,143,144



#17 Charlie (5 points) 145,146,147,148,149



#16 Abrar (3 points) 150,151,152



#15 T.O. (3 points) 153,154,15



#14 Nick (3 points) 156,157,158



#13 Dean (3 points) 159,160,161



#12 Lisa (4 points) 162,163,164,165



#11 Connor (spot the 4 keys!) (3 points) 166,167,168



#10 Vikki (3 points) 169,170,171



#9 Paulo (2 points) 172,173



#8 Agnes (5 points) 174,175,176,177,178



#7 Francis (1 point) 179



#6 Glen (3 points) 180,181,182




#5 Carl (5 points) (with a Portal reference!)  183,184,185,86,187




#4  Sean (2 points)  188,189



#3 Paul (2 points) 190,191



#2 Pieter (2 points) 192,193



#1 David (4 points) 194,195,196,197




BIG KING OF THORNS SPOILERS!